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FOS Escalation Letter Template

Taking your complaint to the Financial Ombudsman.

#Before You Escalate

✅ You've complained to the company first

✅ You have their final response letter, OR

✅ 8 weeks have passed with no final response

✅ You're within 6 months of their final response

#How to Submit

You can submit to FOS:

#Template Letter / Online Form Content

#Section 1: Your Details

Full Name: [Your name]
Address: [Your address]
Email: [Your email]
Phone: [Your phone number]
Preferred contact method: [Email / Phone / Post]

#Section 2: Company Details

Company Name: [Full legal name of the financial firm]
Your Reference Number: [Account number, policy number, etc.]

#Section 3: What Is Your Complaint About?

[Select all that apply or describe:]

  • Banking
  • Credit card
  • Loan / credit
  • Mortgage
  • Insurance
  • Investment
  • Pension
  • Payment services
  • Other: [specify]

#Section 4: Timeline of Events

[Set out what happened in chronological order:]

[Date 1]: [What happened – e.g., "I took out a PCP finance agreement for £15,000"]
[Date 2]: [What happened – e.g., "I discovered the dealer received undisclosed commission"]
[Date 3]: [What happened – e.g., "I complained to the lender"]
[Date 4]: [What happened – e.g., "The lender rejected my complaint"]

#Section 5: What Went Wrong?

[Explain clearly what the company did wrong:]

I believe [Company Name] acted unfairly because:

  1. [First reason – e.g., "They did not disclose commission paid to the dealer"]
  2. [Second reason – e.g., "They did not conduct proper affordability checks"]
  3. [Third reason – e.g., "They failed to treat me fairly as a vulnerable customer"]

#Section 6: Impact on You

[Explain how this affected you:]

As a result of the company's actions:

  • I paid £[X] more than I should have
  • I experienced [financial hardship / stress / inconvenience]
  • I spent [X hours] trying to resolve this
  • [Any other impact]

#Section 7: Company's Response

[Summarise what the company said:]

On [date], the company sent their final response. They said:

[Brief summary of their position – e.g., "They claim the commission was disclosed in the small print and reject my complaint"]

I disagree because:

[Your response to their points]

#Section 8: What Do You Want?

[Be specific about the outcome you're seeking:]

I am asking for:

  1. [Primary remedy – e.g., "Refund of commission paid: £X"]
  2. [Interest – e.g., "8% simple interest on the above from [date] to settlement"]
  3. [Compensation – e.g., "£X compensation for distress and inconvenience"]
  4. [Other – e.g., "Removal of negative credit file entries"]

Total sought: £[Amount]

#Section 9: Supporting Documents

I am attaching:

  • Company's final response letter
  • Copy of my original complaint
  • Contract / agreement
  • Bank statements
  • Correspondence with the company
  • Evidence of financial impact
  • [Other relevant documents]

#Section 10: Declaration

I confirm that:

  • The information I have provided is true and accurate
  • I understand FOS may share this with the company
  • I authorise FOS to obtain relevant information on my behalf

Signature: [Your name]
Date: [Today's date]


#What Happens Next

#Tips for Success

Be factual – Stick to facts, not emotions

Be specific – Dates, amounts, names

Be concise – Ombudsmen read hundreds of cases

Attach evidence – Especially the final response letter

State your desired outcome – Don't make them guess